Thank you! I'm really sorry for how long it's taken for me to get to this, could you provide screenshots or otherwise provide more detail about the problem?
Did you play through the entirety of chapter one? Sam is the MC's fake name, but near the end of chapter one (after meeting V) you should be asked to choose their real name. I know it's pretty late so it's easy to miss but it should be there!!!
This is really good! At first I was aiming for Lena when I read the descriptions of the LIs but when I actually played the game, I ended up liking Saorise more.
Ah, sorry! I didn't notice the screenshot didn't post alongside my comment. But I went and checked out the part I mentioned and the error isn't there anymore so it could have been just my browser or laptop but either way, it's good!
Also i hope i can become a vilain beacause they kinda destroyed your life and now want to use you as weapon, i want so bad to become a vilain and destroy them
Didnt completed game yet. I just was kidnaped and while in van thinking why we have no choice on useing our powers to sabotage driving or not getting angry at all with all this stuff going on about org. useing you as tool, we just like sponge "oh, ok, i was kindnaped right, this is bad ok" and cant "rrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaawwwwrrrrr i`ll kill you all you $^&%&^ for mind control me and breakin` into my house and all". We can get angry at whatever we was angry and yell at out mother but cant yell at total strangers and unpleasant idiots? Cool, we are pathetic then.
I appreciate your suggestions, though I feel I should mention there's only so much I can do. The plot of the game involves being with the Organisation. And anyway, MC was far too exhausted to use their flair in the van, not to mention the obvious risks.
I'll see what I can do, thanks for letting me know your thoughts.
Hey, i looking forward to play again when you add more story for us.
I did not hint at the possibility of escaping from the Organization (although if you think about it, you can think of it as coming up with a separate storyline), only at the inaction of the hero who seemed a little soft or something. As for fatigue, I didn't think about it, for which I apologize, although it would be possible to directly write about it in the form of a narrative or the hero's thoughts about escaping from the car.
I'm glad you're interested in the story, so thanks! :)
You make some great points, and I'll definitely be considering them when I do my second draft! I do think that mentioning fatigue/reasoning for not being hostile in the game is a good idea. I do want players to be able to relate to the MC, so this feedback is very important and helpful. Thank you very much for your thoughts and suggestions, have a lovely day!
Just a heads up, person writing this story. I noticed this:
'Espers were even rarer, making up 27% of all catalysts.'
But 27% is not rare - that's saying almost 1/3 of anyone who's a catalyst is an Esper, which is incredibly common. Now, if it were 2%? That would be rare.
There'll certainly be opportunities to oppose the organisation etc! Unfortunately, I can't make any promises about completely running away just yet. :)
First things first, thank you β€οΈ for the update even if it was a minor one; I got to meet all of the ROs β¨ and it was quite intriguing ;).
I'm telling you, it's really gonna be a hard time for me to choose a route. All of them are quite compelling β¨β¨ so I'm gonna play all the routes in the future π
White fluffy hair and tall!!! AAAaaa what a combo!! I loved him the instance I read that π.. Leith is quite interesting too....
Well time to break out of prison or forced enslavement Refuse to work for an organization I have known nothing about and might be used as nothing but a weapon
This is an insane piece of creativity and thrill! I love everything about it, especially the fact that there are alot of ROs .... Hehe can't wait for more ;_;
OHHHh I love this premise, I want this story, I cannot wait for more. I really hope you're still working on this, because I absolutely want to get to know the agents.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! I am definitely still working on it, and the first part of chapter 2 is currently being edited. You'll get to know the agents more really soon!
I really like this, I can't wait for the next update to come out. I'm sure this is gonna be a one heck of a roller coaster adventure with the 4 LI, mixed with comedy, drama, AND ROMANCE, ofc. Keep it up!:D
This looks promising! I'm craving for text-based IF recently and I'm so glad i found this. Can't wait for the whole thing! Veran already charmed meπ§ββοΈ
I- I CANT DID YOU REALLY PUT IN THE YOUTUBE ICON INSIDE OF THE STORY A LINK TO THAT!!!!! I FRICKING LOVE YOU, I mean, I haven't started the game, but I already know that I'm going to like it xDDDD
Currently in pain over finishing the demo it's amazing π I can't wait for the rest of the story I'm so exited over it![help it's 4 am so excuse my lack of words/using the same wording and the overuse of I]
OH DEAR LORD Veran/V my beloved despite him/them doing nothing but smiling and being concerned they've captured my heart can't wait to see more of them and the others the next update π€Έ
ALSO the way the mc is built is just chef kiss I love the dynamic they have going on and feel so bad for them also hope to see how Mother over there effects the story π Though that mom part hit over my mom acting quite similar π§
Anywaysss author this is amazing work you have here and I simply can't wait for your future work I'll be supporting you all the way along with others! Can't wait for more!πβ¨
I'm glad you like them! The chapter is coming along, as quickly as I can manage and I'm also super excited about it
It's really reassuring that you like MC! It's difficult to still create a character but also give them a malleable personality (if that makes any sense.) And I'm glad (?) people feel bad for MC because that was sort of my intention. If I'm honest, MC's mother was the hardest part for me to write so I'm happy it didn't seem unrealistic, but sad that your mother behaves similarly.
Thank you so much! It's so wonderful and heart-warming to have people supporting me and it really means a lot!
This was such a delight! I came across this by pure chance, since I really wanted to play whatever lgbt+ game I could find, and I was immediately hooked with the synopsis! A world with superpowers?? and an mc being hunted because of having a superpower?? (gasp also being a criminal?? tho a petty one 'cause mc's not evil just starving or maybe...) YESH THAT'S MY SHIT ( β§β ΝΚβ)
I like how all the choices of appearance, sexuality, and personality have been implemented so far, and I'm really excited to see the consequences of choices in the future! I'm curious to see if the mc's relationship with their mom has any impact to the story, though I understand if it was just for the backstory.
I'm so looking forward to really getting to know the other characters! I love how there's an option to just pursue friendships, I don't think I've ever seen that option in any game I've played before! But romance is my passion, so I'll definitely have me some smooches from the love interests lol
Also, I reaaaaaally love how mc hates social interactions, like I got the sense that they'd rather be fighting Jackson's goons than be talking to this nice new neighbor. It just makes a whole lotta sense given mc's upbringing and this superpower they can't control that badly affects others through touch, not to mention being literally hunted and the paranoia of others that causes. Poor mc even made up a lie about being sick just to not interact with other people. I hope the love interests give the mc a big hug, they must be lonely. I'll even take a group hug lol! WAIT I just remembered mc saw their mom get shot!! Oh the poor mc DEFINITELY needs some comfort! WAIT WAIT IF MOM GOT SHOT, WHERE'S DAD???
Oh jeez, this comment turned out really long, I hope that's alright! lol as you can tell, I really enjoyed the demo and am looking forward to what happens next! (βΛ Β³ Λ)β₯
ps V already caught my eye lol! They're the brains of the group and yet they completely forgot to mention that the team's priority is their neighbor?? I feel that!
Hey! Thank you so much, I almost cried when I read this it's so sweet! I'm glad you like the format of the choices.And yes your choices do matter! While they won't affect the overall storyline dramatically, they'll certainly be brought back up and matter more.
I'm sorry you didn't already get to meet the characters, but you will get a lot of them in the next chapter I promise! And as for the friendship route, as someone on the aro-ace spectrum I totally understand that people may want to play a game without romance and I'm going to work to make every route as fulfilling as each other!
I'm glad you like it! I thought about making MC a complete blank canvas but it honestly just didn't make much sense to me considering their backstory and situation, plus it would make story-writing bland. I definitely want a lot of found family in this, so (group) hugs are a must!
Good eye on that pick-up with MC's mum! And as for their dad.... well... SPOILERS!
Long comments are totally fine! This definitely made my day so thank you very much! Comments like this are also super motivating!
And I totally relate too, supposedly being academically smart yet totally scatterbrained!
Thank you so so much for the lovely comment, and playing of course! <33
Like the posts before me, I really enjoyed the demo! Really interesting plot, got me hooked immediately. I'd love to meet the characters! Can't wait for new updates :D
honestly I loved it, the reading is pleasant and full of suspense. When the demo stopped I was like: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO XD I can't wait to see the rest of the story and see the characters since we barely saw them <3 keep going !
(ps : later we will be abble to choose the height of our character ?)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sorry that you barely got to meet the characters but there will be lots of them in the next chapter! And yes, your height is actually the first choice in the chapter coming.
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Really good so far, but i cans choose my name for some reason.
Thank you! I'm really sorry for how long it's taken for me to get to this, could you provide screenshots or otherwise provide more detail about the problem?
Alr, so like, whenever I start the game my name is Sam and throughout the game, it never asks me for my name. Tbh, its probably just me TwT.
Did you play through the entirety of chapter one? Sam is the MC's fake name, but near the end of chapter one (after meeting V) you should be asked to choose their real name. I know it's pretty late so it's easy to miss but it should be there!!!
I did, but it didn't show me it.
Pretty good but short, is this still updated?
Hello, thank you for playing! Esper has not been abandoned, and will hopefully be updated soon :)
This is really good! At first I was aiming for Lena when I read the descriptions of the LIs but when I actually played the game, I ended up liking Saorise more.
Looking forward to the the continuation!
Thank you so much!!! <333
Is this still being continued??
hey!!! it is currently being worked on again but development has been slow. for monthly updates you can check out my tumblr.
thank you for your interest :)
This is a really good game! I love the writing and the characters, but there seems to be a bug? At the part where you can input your own name:
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but nonetheless, excited to see more of how this unfolds!
I'm glad you like it!
I haven't been able to encounter any bug around there, could you elaborate? Or submit screenshots to the feedback form?
Ah, sorry! I didn't notice the screenshot didn't post alongside my comment. But I went and checked out the part I mentioned and the error isn't there anymore so it could have been just my browser or laptop but either way, it's good!
Great to hear! Thank you for playing.
This game is sooooooo good
Also i hope i can become a vilain beacause they kinda destroyed your life and now want to use you as weapon, i want so bad to become a vilain and destroy them
MUHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAA
*cough* ahem good game by the way
Good to hear you enjoyed it!!!
And you'll just have to see...
I love this story so much I can't wait to see how it unfold
Ahhh thank you! <3
np
need more of jackson in my life /hj
Pfft, you're making me feel like I should make a side game... (kidding I swear)
Thank you for playing <3
Didnt completed game yet. I just was kidnaped and while in van thinking why we have no choice on useing our powers to sabotage driving or not getting angry at all with all this stuff going on about org. useing you as tool, we just like sponge "oh, ok, i was kindnaped right, this is bad ok" and cant "rrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaawwwwrrrrr i`ll kill you all you $^&%&^ for mind control me and breakin` into my house and all". We can get angry at whatever we was angry and yell at out mother but cant yell at total strangers and unpleasant idiots? Cool, we are pathetic then.
Ah, that was end after they answer MC questions, cant proceed quickly coz i think what i would do at this kind of situation.
Hey, thanks for playing.
I appreciate your suggestions, though I feel I should mention there's only so much I can do. The plot of the game involves being with the Organisation. And anyway, MC was far too exhausted to use their flair in the van, not to mention the obvious risks.
I'll see what I can do, thanks for letting me know your thoughts.
Hey, i looking forward to play again when you add more story for us.
I did not hint at the possibility of escaping from the Organization (although if you think about it, you can think of it as coming up with a separate storyline), only at the inaction of the hero who seemed a little soft or something. As for fatigue, I didn't think about it, for which I apologize, although it would be possible to directly write about it in the form of a narrative or the hero's thoughts about escaping from the car.
I'm glad you're interested in the story, so thanks! :)
You make some great points, and I'll definitely be considering them when I do my second draft! I do think that mentioning fatigue/reasoning for not being hostile in the game is a good idea. I do want players to be able to relate to the MC, so this feedback is very important and helpful. Thank you very much for your thoughts and suggestions, have a lovely day!
I came back to this story ten months later and it's still as good as I remember:D
Thank you so much!I'm happy you still like it. I also apologise for you having to wait so long
It's no problem I'll wait for as long as it takes since your story is truly amazing!
Made my day, thank you :))) <3
I can't change the gender for some reason
Hi, could you please explain in more detail what the problem is? Everything seems to be working for me
well when I try to change the gender it doesn't work for some unknown reason I tried many times but it won't work
I'll look into it when I can. In the meantime you could submit a screenshot here, to my tumblr or this form so that I can best address the issue :)
I'll try :)
bug
ig that's just their name now
Thanks, this error is on my list to fix when I get the chance.
Just a heads up, person writing this story. I noticed this:
'Espers were even rarer, making up 27% of all catalysts.'
But 27% is not rare - that's saying almost 1/3 of anyone who's a catalyst is an Esper, which is incredibly common. Now, if it were 2%? That would be rare.
Thanks for letting me know, when I'm able to I'll fix the phrasing etc. to make it more clear :)
AHHHHHHHHHH. Thats it. Thats the post.
<3
This parttttttttt!!
Omg this killed meeeeee...i was literally laughing like a maniac at midnight ππ..
And HEY... I CLICKED THAT OPTION, JUST CUZ I WAS CURIOUS π AND NOTHING MORE OR LESS... I don't like him π₯Ί
Haha I'm glad you found it funny!!! <3
Nice update!
Just hope that there will be opportunity to run away from institute/organization.
Hey, that's actually a very nice idea π
Thanks!
There'll certainly be opportunities to oppose the organisation etc! Unfortunately, I can't make any promises about completely running away just yet. :)
First things first, thank you β€οΈ for the update even if it was a minor one; I got to meet all of the ROs β¨ and it was quite intriguing ;).
I'm telling you, it's really gonna be a hard time for me to choose a route. All of them are quite compelling β¨β¨ so I'm gonna play all the routes in the future π
White fluffy hair and tall!!! AAAaaa what a combo!! I loved him the instance I read that π.. Leith is quite interesting too....
Thanks for reading it!! I'm glad you enjoyed the update!
It's good to know you like all the characters!
Again, thank you for your lovely comment, it really made my day!
Finally an update, thanks author mwuah!
Thank you for reading! <3
Well time to break out of prison or forced enslavement Refuse to work for an organization I have known nothing about and might be used as nothing but a weapon
aaaaaa this was amazing u should toats make more <3
Thank you!
npp!
This is an insane piece of creativity and thrill! I love everything about it, especially the fact that there are alot of ROs .... Hehe can't wait for more ;_;
I'm happy you're enjoying it! Thanks for your interest and sweet comment! <3
β£οΈ
Love the writing in this already :D my heart is conflicted there already looks like so many good romance options.
Thank you! I'm glad you like the ROs! <3
Very promising, looking foward to any extensions, thats for sure.
Thanks for the comment!
OHHHh I love this premise, I want this story, I cannot wait for more. I really hope you're still working on this, because I absolutely want to get to know the agents.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! I am definitely still working on it, and the first part of chapter 2 is currently being edited. You'll get to know the agents more really soon!
Thankyou for the comment! <3
NOT THE "GET WELL SOON <3" I'M CRYING
Hah, I'm glad you liked my little joke!
Thanks for playing!!! <333
For a story that's just the prologue, this is insanely popular and really fun to read. Can't wait to see the completed product. :)
Thank you for the sweet comment! I hope to get the next chapter out soon.
Thanks also for playing :D
Iβm hungry, Iβm thirsty, only the update can fill me up *puppy eyes *blink blink
Hopefully not too long now!
Thanks for playing!
This new literraly brightened up my day, luv ya luv ya β‘
I really like this, I can't wait for the next update to come out. I'm sure this is gonna be a one heck of a roller coaster adventure with the 4 LI, mixed with comedy, drama, AND ROMANCE, ofc. Keep it up!:D
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the kind words. And I appreciate you appreciating my attempts at comedy haha.
Thanks again for playing! <3
This was really amazing I can't wait for more keep up the good work!
Thank you! <333
I love thiss!!! I can't wait for more good job <333
Thank you!!!! <333
damn comment below me:)
This looks promising! I'm craving for text-based IF recently and I'm so glad i found this. Can't wait for the whole thing! Veran already charmed meπ§ββοΈ
Thank you! And thanks for playing <33
I- I CANT DID YOU REALLY PUT IN THE YOUTUBE ICON INSIDE OF THE STORY A LINK TO THAT!!!!! I FRICKING LOVE YOU, I mean, I haven't started the game, but I already know that I'm going to like it xDDDD
HAHAA yes it was a legal requirement. I had an extra link and it needed to be filled with something.... Hope you enjoyed the game!
Thanks for the comment!
Currently in pain over finishing the demo it's amazing π I can't wait for the rest of the story I'm so exited over it![help it's 4 am so excuse my lack of words/using the same wording and the overuse of I]
OH DEAR LORD Veran/V my beloved despite him/them doing nothing but smiling and being concerned they've captured my heart can't wait to see more of them and the others the next update π€Έ
ALSO the way the mc is built is just chef kiss I love the dynamic they have going on and feel so bad for them also hope to see how Mother over there effects the story π Though that mom part hit over my mom acting quite similar π§
Anywaysss author this is amazing work you have here and I simply can't wait for your future work I'll be supporting you all the way along with others! Can't wait for more!πβ¨
Ahhh thank you!!! Goodish pain, I hope! (also dw it's totally fine!)
I'm glad you like them! The chapter is coming along, as quickly as I can manage and I'm also super excited about it
It's really reassuring that you like MC! It's difficult to still create a character but also give them a malleable personality (if that makes any sense.) And I'm glad (?) people feel bad for MC because that was sort of my intention. If I'm honest, MC's mother was the hardest part for me to write so I'm happy it didn't seem unrealistic, but sad that your mother behaves similarly.
Thank you so much! It's so wonderful and heart-warming to have people supporting me and it really means a lot!
Thanks for the kind comment <3
This was such a delight! I came across this by pure chance, since I really wanted to play whatever lgbt+ game I could find, and I was immediately hooked with the synopsis! A world with superpowers?? and an mc being hunted because of having a superpower?? (gasp also being a criminal?? tho a petty one 'cause mc's not evil just starving or maybe...) YESH THAT'S MY SHIT ( β§β ΝΚβ)
I like how all the choices of appearance, sexuality, and personality have been implemented so far, and I'm really excited to see the consequences of choices in the future! I'm curious to see if the mc's relationship with their mom has any impact to the story, though I understand if it was just for the backstory.
I'm so looking forward to really getting to know the other characters! I love how there's an option to just pursue friendships, I don't think I've ever seen that option in any game I've played before! But romance is my passion, so I'll definitely have me some smooches from the love interests lol
Also, I reaaaaaally love how mc hates social interactions, like I got the sense that they'd rather be fighting Jackson's goons than be talking to this nice new neighbor. It just makes a whole lotta sense given mc's upbringing and this superpower they can't control that badly affects others through touch, not to mention being literally hunted and the paranoia of others that causes. Poor mc even made up a lie about being sick just to not interact with other people. I hope the love interests give the mc a big hug, they must be lonely. I'll even take a group hug lol! WAIT I just remembered mc saw their mom get shot!! Oh the poor mc DEFINITELY needs some comfort! WAIT WAIT IF MOM GOT SHOT, WHERE'S DAD???
Oh jeez, this comment turned out really long, I hope that's alright! lol as you can tell, I really enjoyed the demo and am looking forward to what happens next! (βΛ Β³ Λ)β₯
ps V already caught my eye lol! They're the brains of the group and yet they completely forgot to mention that the team's priority is their neighbor?? I feel that!
Hey! Thank you so much, I almost cried when I read this it's so sweet! I'm glad you like the format of the choices.And yes your choices do matter! While they won't affect the overall storyline dramatically, they'll certainly be brought back up and matter more.
I'm sorry you didn't already get to meet the characters, but you will get a lot of them in the next chapter I promise! And as for the friendship route, as someone on the aro-ace spectrum I totally understand that people may want to play a game without romance and I'm going to work to make every route as fulfilling as each other!
I'm glad you like it! I thought about making MC a complete blank canvas but it honestly just didn't make much sense to me considering their backstory and situation, plus it would make story-writing bland. I definitely want a lot of found family in this, so (group) hugs are a must!
Good eye on that pick-up with MC's mum! And as for their dad.... well... SPOILERS!
Long comments are totally fine! This definitely made my day so thank you very much! Comments like this are also super motivating!
And I totally relate too, supposedly being academically smart yet totally scatterbrained!
Thank you so so much for the lovely comment, and playing of course! <33
This was surprisingly good got me wanting more, can't wait for more updates keep up the great work :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks! :D
Like the posts before me, I really enjoyed the demo! Really interesting plot, got me hooked immediately. I'd love to meet the characters! Can't wait for new updates :D
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and more is definitely coming! You'll get more time with the characters too.
Thanks for playing and commenting! :D
I want more so badly ;-;
I am currently working on the second chapter so hopefully you won't have to wait too long!!!
Thanks for playing! <3
IT WAS SO COOL !
honestly I loved it, the reading is pleasant and full of suspense. When the demo stopped I was like: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO XD I can't wait to see the rest of the story and see the characters since we barely saw them <3 keep going !
(ps : later we will be abble to choose the height of our character ?)
AHHH THANK YOU!!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sorry that you barely got to meet the characters but there will be lots of them in the next chapter! And yes, your height is actually the first choice in the chapter coming.
Thank you for playing and commenting! <3
it good read
Thanks! And thank you for playing! :D