This looks promising! I'm craving for text-based IF recently and I'm so glad i found this. Can't wait for the whole thing! Veran already charmed meπ§ββοΈ
I- I CANT DID YOU REALLY PUT IN THE YOUTUBE ICON INSIDE OF THE STORY A LINK TO THAT!!!!! I FRICKING LOVE YOU, I mean, I haven't started the game, but I already know that I'm going to like it xDDDD
Currently in pain over finishing the demo it's amazing π I can't wait for the rest of the story I'm so exited over it![help it's 4 am so excuse my lack of words/using the same wording and the overuse of I]
OH DEAR LORD Veran/V my beloved despite him/them doing nothing but smiling and being concerned they've captured my heart can't wait to see more of them and the others the next update π€Έ
ALSO the way the mc is built is just chef kiss I love the dynamic they have going on and feel so bad for them also hope to see how Mother over there effects the story π Though that mom part hit over my mom acting quite similar π§
Anywaysss author this is amazing work you have here and I simply can't wait for your future work I'll be supporting you all the way along with others! Can't wait for more!πβ¨
I'm glad you like them! The chapter is coming along, as quickly as I can manage and I'm also super excited about it
It's really reassuring that you like MC! It's difficult to still create a character but also give them a malleable personality (if that makes any sense.) And I'm glad (?) people feel bad for MC because that was sort of my intention. If I'm honest, MC's mother was the hardest part for me to write so I'm happy it didn't seem unrealistic, but sad that your mother behaves similarly.
Thank you so much! It's so wonderful and heart-warming to have people supporting me and it really means a lot!
This was such a delight! I came across this by pure chance, since I really wanted to play whatever lgbt+ game I could find, and I was immediately hooked with the synopsis! A world with superpowers?? and an mc being hunted because of having a superpower?? (gasp also being a criminal?? tho a petty one 'cause mc's not evil just starving or maybe...) YESH THAT'S MY SHIT ( β§β ΝΚβ)
I like how all the choices of appearance, sexuality, and personality have been implemented so far, and I'm really excited to see the consequences of choices in the future! I'm curious to see if the mc's relationship with their mom has any impact to the story, though I understand if it was just for the backstory.
I'm so looking forward to really getting to know the other characters! I love how there's an option to just pursue friendships, I don't think I've ever seen that option in any game I've played before! But romance is my passion, so I'll definitely have me some smooches from the love interests lol
Also, I reaaaaaally love how mc hates social interactions, like I got the sense that they'd rather be fighting Jackson's goons than be talking to this nice new neighbor. It just makes a whole lotta sense given mc's upbringing and this superpower they can't control that badly affects others through touch, not to mention being literally hunted and the paranoia of others that causes. Poor mc even made up a lie about being sick just to not interact with other people. I hope the love interests give the mc a big hug, they must be lonely. I'll even take a group hug lol! WAIT I just remembered mc saw their mom get shot!! Oh the poor mc DEFINITELY needs some comfort! WAIT WAIT IF MOM GOT SHOT, WHERE'S DAD???
Oh jeez, this comment turned out really long, I hope that's alright! lol as you can tell, I really enjoyed the demo and am looking forward to what happens next! (βΛ Β³ Λ)β₯
ps V already caught my eye lol! They're the brains of the group and yet they completely forgot to mention that the team's priority is their neighbor?? I feel that!
Hey! Thank you so much, I almost cried when I read this it's so sweet! I'm glad you like the format of the choices.And yes your choices do matter! While they won't affect the overall storyline dramatically, they'll certainly be brought back up and matter more.
I'm sorry you didn't already get to meet the characters, but you will get a lot of them in the next chapter I promise! And as for the friendship route, as someone on the aro-ace spectrum I totally understand that people may want to play a game without romance and I'm going to work to make every route as fulfilling as each other!
I'm glad you like it! I thought about making MC a complete blank canvas but it honestly just didn't make much sense to me considering their backstory and situation, plus it would make story-writing bland. I definitely want a lot of found family in this, so (group) hugs are a must!
Good eye on that pick-up with MC's mum! And as for their dad.... well... SPOILERS!
Long comments are totally fine! This definitely made my day so thank you very much! Comments like this are also super motivating!
And I totally relate too, supposedly being academically smart yet totally scatterbrained!
Thank you so so much for the lovely comment, and playing of course! <33
Like the posts before me, I really enjoyed the demo! Really interesting plot, got me hooked immediately. I'd love to meet the characters! Can't wait for new updates :D
honestly I loved it, the reading is pleasant and full of suspense. When the demo stopped I was like: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO XD I can't wait to see the rest of the story and see the characters since we barely saw them <3 keep going !
(ps : later we will be abble to choose the height of our character ?)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sorry that you barely got to meet the characters but there will be lots of them in the next chapter! And yes, your height is actually the first choice in the chapter coming.
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This looks promising! I'm craving for text-based IF recently and I'm so glad i found this. Can't wait for the whole thing! Veran already charmed meπ§ββοΈ
Thank you! And thanks for playing <33
I- I CANT DID YOU REALLY PUT IN THE YOUTUBE ICON INSIDE OF THE STORY A LINK TO THAT!!!!! I FRICKING LOVE YOU, I mean, I haven't started the game, but I already know that I'm going to like it xDDDD
HAHAA yes it was a legal requirement. I had an extra link and it needed to be filled with something.... Hope you enjoyed the game!
Thanks for the comment!
Currently in pain over finishing the demo it's amazing π I can't wait for the rest of the story I'm so exited over it![help it's 4 am so excuse my lack of words/using the same wording and the overuse of I]
OH DEAR LORD Veran/V my beloved despite him/them doing nothing but smiling and being concerned they've captured my heart can't wait to see more of them and the others the next update π€Έ
ALSO the way the mc is built is just chef kiss I love the dynamic they have going on and feel so bad for them also hope to see how Mother over there effects the story π Though that mom part hit over my mom acting quite similar π§
Anywaysss author this is amazing work you have here and I simply can't wait for your future work I'll be supporting you all the way along with others! Can't wait for more!πβ¨
Ahhh thank you!!! Goodish pain, I hope! (also dw it's totally fine!)
I'm glad you like them! The chapter is coming along, as quickly as I can manage and I'm also super excited about it
It's really reassuring that you like MC! It's difficult to still create a character but also give them a malleable personality (if that makes any sense.) And I'm glad (?) people feel bad for MC because that was sort of my intention. If I'm honest, MC's mother was the hardest part for me to write so I'm happy it didn't seem unrealistic, but sad that your mother behaves similarly.
Thank you so much! It's so wonderful and heart-warming to have people supporting me and it really means a lot!
Thanks for the kind comment <3
This was such a delight! I came across this by pure chance, since I really wanted to play whatever lgbt+ game I could find, and I was immediately hooked with the synopsis! A world with superpowers?? and an mc being hunted because of having a superpower?? (gasp also being a criminal?? tho a petty one 'cause mc's not evil just starving or maybe...) YESH THAT'S MY SHIT ( β§β ΝΚβ)
I like how all the choices of appearance, sexuality, and personality have been implemented so far, and I'm really excited to see the consequences of choices in the future! I'm curious to see if the mc's relationship with their mom has any impact to the story, though I understand if it was just for the backstory.
I'm so looking forward to really getting to know the other characters! I love how there's an option to just pursue friendships, I don't think I've ever seen that option in any game I've played before! But romance is my passion, so I'll definitely have me some smooches from the love interests lol
Also, I reaaaaaally love how mc hates social interactions, like I got the sense that they'd rather be fighting Jackson's goons than be talking to this nice new neighbor. It just makes a whole lotta sense given mc's upbringing and this superpower they can't control that badly affects others through touch, not to mention being literally hunted and the paranoia of others that causes. Poor mc even made up a lie about being sick just to not interact with other people. I hope the love interests give the mc a big hug, they must be lonely. I'll even take a group hug lol! WAIT I just remembered mc saw their mom get shot!! Oh the poor mc DEFINITELY needs some comfort! WAIT WAIT IF MOM GOT SHOT, WHERE'S DAD???
Oh jeez, this comment turned out really long, I hope that's alright! lol as you can tell, I really enjoyed the demo and am looking forward to what happens next! (βΛ Β³ Λ)β₯
ps V already caught my eye lol! They're the brains of the group and yet they completely forgot to mention that the team's priority is their neighbor?? I feel that!
Hey! Thank you so much, I almost cried when I read this it's so sweet! I'm glad you like the format of the choices.And yes your choices do matter! While they won't affect the overall storyline dramatically, they'll certainly be brought back up and matter more.
I'm sorry you didn't already get to meet the characters, but you will get a lot of them in the next chapter I promise! And as for the friendship route, as someone on the aro-ace spectrum I totally understand that people may want to play a game without romance and I'm going to work to make every route as fulfilling as each other!
I'm glad you like it! I thought about making MC a complete blank canvas but it honestly just didn't make much sense to me considering their backstory and situation, plus it would make story-writing bland. I definitely want a lot of found family in this, so (group) hugs are a must!
Good eye on that pick-up with MC's mum! And as for their dad.... well... SPOILERS!
Long comments are totally fine! This definitely made my day so thank you very much! Comments like this are also super motivating!
And I totally relate too, supposedly being academically smart yet totally scatterbrained!
Thank you so so much for the lovely comment, and playing of course! <33
This was surprisingly good got me wanting more, can't wait for more updates keep up the great work :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks! :D
Like the posts before me, I really enjoyed the demo! Really interesting plot, got me hooked immediately. I'd love to meet the characters! Can't wait for new updates :D
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and more is definitely coming! You'll get more time with the characters too.
Thanks for playing and commenting! :D
I want more so badly ;-;
I am currently working on the second chapter so hopefully you won't have to wait too long!!!
Thanks for playing! <3
IT WAS SO COOL !
honestly I loved it, the reading is pleasant and full of suspense. When the demo stopped I was like: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO XD I can't wait to see the rest of the story and see the characters since we barely saw them <3 keep going !
(ps : later we will be abble to choose the height of our character ?)
AHHH THANK YOU!!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sorry that you barely got to meet the characters but there will be lots of them in the next chapter! And yes, your height is actually the first choice in the chapter coming.
Thank you for playing and commenting! <3
it good read
Thanks! And thank you for playing! :D